I am falling in
spring
Myunghee
Lee
I took a walk on a cool spring day.
Many flowers bring spring to me
Forsythia, Cherry bloom, Magnolia and unknown flowers
It smells colorful color of spring
These flowers are fallen in spring to me
A sprout bring spring to me
Various trees
are coming into leaf
It sees green of spring
These trees are fallen in spring to me
Birds bring spring to me
The birds are singing a song to cerebrate spring
It sounds a song of spring
These birds are fallen in spring to me
Spring fever bring spring to
me
The spring has me take nap on
moss
It touches a sweet of spring
This fever is fallen in spring to me
This fever is fallen in spring to me
Myunghee, this is beautiful! Thank you!
ReplyDeleteMyunghee good job.Good use of spring in each line.:)
ReplyDeleteMyunghee, Your poem truly achieves what is magical about poetry. It allows you to feel the words with your senses. I especially like the image of taking a nap on the moss. I can feel the cool, damp, springy moss. Thank you!
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